Here's a scene from Chapter 7! A real moment of tension…
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Here's a scene from Chapter 7! A real moment of tension! Here's some text!
“It’s just, like I told you, I think she’s the girl that haunted me and now here she is and I’m afraid she doesn’t want anything to do with me,” Ryuji went on but once he looked up to his Father he saw him raising his hand, telling him to stop as when he raised his head, across the room was his Mother, Haruka and Natsume.
In that instant Haruka and his Mother became background noise, the only thing Ryuji could focus on was Natsume. His mind’s eye super imposed Natsume’s beautifully sad face when they parted.
Natsume froze in place, almost as if she could sense his thoughts as in that moment she remembered that look of longing in Ryuji’s eyes during their date.
Ba-dum! Ba-dum!
Their hearts were beating in tandem but neither could bring themselves to say anything, merely stare into each other’s eyes.
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“It’s just, like I told you, I think she’s the girl that haunted me and now here she is and I’m afraid she doesn’t want anything to do with me,” Ryuji went on but once he looked up to his Father he saw him raising his hand, telling him to stop as when he raised his head, across the room was his Mother, Haruka and Natsume.
In that instant Haruka and his Mother became background noise, the only thing Ryuji could focus on was Natsume. His mind’s eye super imposed Natsume’s beautifully sad face when they parted.
Natsume froze in place, almost as if she could sense his thoughts as in that moment she remembered that look of longing in Ryuji’s eyes during their date.
Ba-dum! Ba-dum!
Their hearts were beating in tandem but neither could bring themselves to say anything, merely stare into each other’s eyes.
Please check out my novel! Links below!
https://www.deviantart.com/kiyomumitsue/art/Natsu's-Life-Chapter-1-964788714
https://www.webnovel.com/book/32414756408633105
https://archiveofourown.org/works/47519029/chapters/119755699
https://www.royalroad.com/author-dashboard/dashboard/112226
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This is so beautifully written! The tension between Ryuji and Natsume is incredible. Love the depth of emotions here!"
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Yeah! It's their moments that always keep me wanting to write for them more. It's always hard wither to want to write more or learn more Blender since both are so fun!