You did a good job showing both the pain and the hidden love in the situation. You clearly explained how the son’s harsh words were not coming from anger, but from inner struggle and pressure. At the same time, you also showed that his actions—giving the money and writing the note—were full of care and concern for his mother. This balance helped make the emotions feel real and easy to understand, showing that love can still exist even when it is not expressed in a gentle way.