If you could name one thing or fundamental that is holding this painting back, what would it be?
I haven’t painted in a while so I’d appreciate more perspectives.
Personally, I think the lineart/sketch lines are a little overdone. I’d take them back a bit and let it take on a more realistic look. Maybe spend some more time fleshing out character render.
The idea is a night setting, overlooking a beach/bay. Plenty of artistic liberty taken with colour choice and render. Subtle sketch lines for a bit of added structure. The focal character is 2nd from the left as the painting is for his birthday. I wanted it to be moody and nostalgic. #art