Hoooooo!!!!! Yeeeeeaaaaahhhhh! Ladies and gentlemen... we got a home-ruunnnnn! Oh man, you got it! that's it!!! You saw the great change it gives to the song now, more shine, more strength, more harmony, well done, well achieved...! Believe me Punk, keep working on these adjustments, polishing your songs and you will continue to have the successes you deserve my friend. I love it!!! In my opinion this song is ready to be taken out of the oven and sold, what has your music promoter said? Did he like it? The quality is totally optimal!!!
can make better drum beat or even play one if he feel like it. I prefer the version without drums as my beats are limited to the logic program. i'm not a natural drummer.
I understand you perfectly, believe me, but, do not resist changes as long as they turn out to be as positive as the ones you begin to give to your music, to your style, you are simply polishing the final product, and it is not the music, it is you as musician, you are evolving, you are adapting and in a great way in my opinion. Yes, talk to Danny to see what he can give you to polish it even more. Have confidence, you are doing a good job, but time will tell, and I assure you it won't be long...! Please keep me posted, okay, it gives me great pleasure, although in a very modest way, to be able to help you!!!!! Successes!!
Okey, i'll check on it! Hey! I almost forgot, I have a title suggestion for a new song maybe, "FAQ'S OFF", you know... like fuck off, it's a play on words, it's about those fucking stupid questions that sometimes people ask us and that we just don't give a fuck to answer...! If it sounds good to you, work on it, play with it, lets see what you come up with it.
Done it Bro!, It sounds great, The only thing I can think of, and a little for you to rest your voice, is to pause only your voice from minute 01:31 to 01:40, so that only the melody, drums and guitar can be heard, and then resume the final part of the lyric, this to allow your audience to enjoy this almost imperceptible detail, and it would only lengthen the song an additional 9 seconds. It's the only thing I can think of, it would sound great, but the product, as it is now, has no waste at all, it's awesome!!
These small pauses are customary for all bands that have only one vocalist, check it out and you will realize, the reasons are: to rest the voice a little and allow the band to shine a little too. This gives an even more professional touch to the ending of the song, less homemade, and also shows confidence in your melodies. But as I mentioned before, I'm being honest with my friend, trying to give you new ideas, new alternatives on how to deliver your music to your audience and how you expect or would like them to receive it...! Cheers Bro! You're doing a great job!!!! I'm proud!!!